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Brent George

Industrial Designer/Transportation Designer — Pittsburgh, PA

Brent George Feb 14, 2010

thanks man, yea I think you are right, ill probably re-attack it soon
Nelson Michael Feb 14, 2010

Impressive. Your glass is spot on, If I may critique, you have very good contrast, but I think you need some highlights, or the old skool method with gouache. This may be hard because you already have that area of white, maybe you could bring down all your cores, reducing the amount of white, making room available for that dab, or sparkle of white. Adding that sparkle will enhance the feeling of shiney paint. Note: You have a little of it already on your front fender.

Nelson Michael Feb 14, 2010

Impressive. Your glass is spot on, If I may critique, you have very good contrast, but I think you need some highlights, or the old skool method with gouache. This may be hard because you already have that area of white, maybe you could bring down all your cores, reducing the amount of white, making room available for that dab, or sparkle of white. Adding that sparkle will enhance the feeling of shiney paint. Note: You have a little of it already on your front fender.
Brent George Feb 14, 2010

thanks man, yea I think you are right, ill probably re-attack it soon