This is a plain language editing project I did for the Cascade Family Acupuncture website. (http://www.cascadefamilyacupuncture.com/index.html) I edited text from multiple pages on the website to create clear, easily understood information for clients considering acupuncture treatments. The original text is in regular font, my edits/rewrites are in italic.
Dr. Ocker said "I love your writing and your suggestions. I used everything, almost verbatim, with only a very few minor changes."
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I contributed an article on using plain language to communicate healthcare information about acupuncture to this edition of the Oregon College of Oriental Medicine's Alumni Newsletter.
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This is the article I wrote on plain language communication for the Fall 2012 edition of the Oregon College of Oriental Medicine's Alumni Newsletter.
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